Theme: Struggling with Terminology
Q: I'm now nearing the end of Story Illustrating and am getting stuck on "Theme Development". The choices I've made so far have resulted in the following Overall Story factors:- Overall Story Thematic Issue: Approach
- Overall Story Thematic Counterpoint: Attitude
A frightened witness sits shaking on a chair by a table in a featureless interrogation room. A Nasty Cop slams his fist on the table in front of the witness, points his finger at the startled witness' face and yells, "We know you know who did it! Tell us or we'll lock you up and throw away the key!!" The nasty cop gestures as if he is about to backhand the witness but stops when the door opens. "We'll have none of that, officer," says the inspector as he enters the room. "Please leave this questioning to me." The inspector turns to the witness. "Would you like some water?" The terrified witness quickly nods, "yes." "Officer, please get our guest a cup of water," the inspector says and gestures the cop to leave the room. The cop stomps off, glaring back and forth between the inspector and witness. He slams the door as he exits. The inspector sits on the edge of the desk and focuses on the witness with a friendly look on his face. The witness noticeably relaxes. "Well, that's better," the inspector says to the witness. "Now we can see if we can find out who is behind these awful murders. Do you think you might be able to help us?"...In this example, I've given the Nasty Cop a negative attitude (You're a hostile witness) and a negative approach (I'll beat the #@%& out of you if I have to). By contrast, I've given the Kind Inspector a positive attitude (We're in this together) and a positive approach (Let's take this calmly). I could easily have mixed it up -- "You're a hostile witness" attitude combined with "Let's take this calmly" approach, or "We're in this together" attitude with "I'll beat the @#%& out of you if I have to" approach. Or illustrated the positives and negatives in any variety of ways. The point is to explore the relative positives and negatives of EACH.